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Jeremy Connell-Waite Jeremy Connell-Waite is an Influencer

Global Communications Designer 👁️🐝Ⓜ️

I just used AI to "improve" a (soon-to-be-famous?) TED talk that I'd never seen before! Using an AI tool that I built recently on IBM’s watsonx platform, I asked it to analyse the transcript of this talk to see if it could make it better.   The TED Talk I chose to analyse for this (very improvised!) 10-min demo only dropped a few hours ago. It’s “Next Up for AI? Dancing Robots” by “Robot Choreographer” Dr. Catie Curan. She’s a Stanford researcher who works at the intersection of artificial intelligence, human-robot interaction. 🤖💃🏻   I trained the model using a storytelling structure favoured by some of my favourite presenters.   I’d love to know what you make of it?   I think it’s a really interesting use case for how we can use large language models to roleplay personal presentation coaches.   Imagine having an expert communications advisor by your side 24/7, ready to guide you whenever you are watching a talk or working on one of your own. One that has been trained to respond to your exact personality type, using storytelling structures and techniques that you love.   While I’ve been developing this tool, I’ve also noticed that using this approach is a really effective learning method. It seems to help some business leaders to understand the art and science of storytelling faster, without always needing to educate them via a course or a classroom.   Learning by doing.   Story SHOWING not story TELLING.   I think of it less like an AI and more like an IA…   Because this isn’t just an “Artificially Intelligent” model that I’ve trained on vast amounts of data to help people write better stories – this is a personalised “Intelligent Assistant” that could help anyone to communicate more effectively at work.   🚫 Now (before you ask!) I'm *NOT* suggesting that tools like this should enable anyone to work on scripts or stories without ever needing to read them!!! 🚫   Neither am I suggesting that this approach should replace communications or storytelling coaches... BUT unfortunately - most business leaders don’t have such a person on hand every time they need one.   That’s why a simple but effective tool like this could help any presenter to perform a little better, by challenging them to improve their own communications. 🤷🏻♂️   Thoughts?

Jeremy Connell-Waite

Global Communications Designer 👁️🐝Ⓜ️

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Chris Hay Another use case to add to our growing list 🙌🏻

Frank Dias

I'm a creative comms lead, storyteller & an AI explorer and integrator. I build & shape tailored employee/internal comms experiences for businesses focusing on their workflow processes.

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Really good Jeremy. Cracking to see your Storytelling Analysis Tool GPT. It'd be great to see what it says for JFK, Obama, Oprah and any of the great speakers. Does it recognise as green your favs? It won't understand the human magic touch and emotion 100%, but like you said, this should be a coaching tool to stimulate your creative ideas and take your first draft. I see it as a conversation companion who doesn't judge. You can be totally honest with it and highlight any 'weaknesses' you perceive, to help it understand you better. It's a smart pen x1000. It's a partner tool to help you get even better and should also form part of the training and development offering. It's a great start. Well done. Lots of fun. From a downside pov, because it's very rigid to your principles, some of its answers were very robotic and staged. Could it have elements of certain biases based on your construct which might not be quite balanced? What about other storytelling lens? I get the Acts structure, however, it could be quite repetitive and formulaic. An opportunity to bring to life your template to be more 'human' as the final output. Anyway, that's my quick take. Very inspirational. Thank you.

Christopher Hurren

Business Transformation Consultant | Quantum, Cloud & AI Enthusiast | IBM

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While testing your story telling assistant did the it ever suggest that an element of a story/presentation/script needed no improvement? I've found that GenAI loves to stochastically oblige users with probable actions and edits even when those actions and edits aren't necessarily improvements to the original material. Sure, it's role of the human in the loop to identify these moments but I'm curious if your assistant has ever responded with "no notes" or maybe just *mic drop* 🎤 Thanks for sharing Jeremy!

Chris Fenning

Helping teams get The First Minute right and improving communication at work

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Has it been tested with the top Ted talks of all time? I’d love to see what it suggests and even if it is able to identify the reasons why those speeches worked so well.

Paul Schokker

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Absolutely awesome Jeremy Connell-Waite. Can someoen lie me use this tool?

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Stephen Plank

Vice President, Research, Evaluation, Evidence and Data at The Annie E. Casey Foundation

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Really thought-provoking. It's interesting to me (not a damning critique, not a Luddite objection, just an observation): AI (and Generative AI) tools absolutely do not feel or experience emotional reaction. And yet they can be trained to anticipate or predict human feelings and emotional reactions. So -- in this particular demonstration and use-case -- an unfeeling algorithmic assistant is giving advice on how to evoke feelings and emotional reactions from audiences. As long as we keep humans in the loops with the machines, I'm on-board for the journey...

Beautiful example of how to effectively utilize AI in the “middle” of the content creation process I’ve seen so much content focusing on AI’s role in creating (1st draft, outlines) and finalizing (grammar checks, tone of voice changes, etc.) content, but I think there’s a ton of untapped value in the refining stage

joshua stryker

Mission driven Communicator and Coach

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Having just read the classic "A Door in the Wall" to my kids, I'm quickly reminded of a quip from Brother Matthew:Tis not the tool that is at fault, but thine unskilled hands,' he said quietly.Moving fwd to today, an intelligent assistant tool for scripts would be invaluable for early learners like me.

Jamie Mentzer

Chief Executive Officer Ai2Market.Com | Leading Ai Marketing Innovations BioFlow.Pro Biometric Meditation Training FlowFuel.Pro Best Supplements Testing gut DNA/RNA

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DM me to talk about turning it into a business I own several SaaS companies and would like to discuss this further, with you and any others you know that have passion and skills

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