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Owned by the Mob Boss
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Actual Rating: 1.5 stars
This was really bad.
It needs so much editing that it is difficult to read for many, many reasons, including how incredibly repetitive it is. It is a rough draft not a finished book.
Originally, I was attracted by the premise of the book, however the execution of it was a let down, mainly because the main characters thoughts and readings are beyond ridiculous. I can handle some absurdity, specially within erotic romances, but what I cannot candle is dumbness and this was so so dumb. I skipped many things, specially after the first half of the book. All the lame mob stuff is tedious.
I actually think, that with enough editing, this could be a decent read. As it stands, is not worth reading at all.
This was really bad.
It needs so much editing that it is difficult to read for many, many reasons, including how incredibly repetitive it is. It is a rough draft not a finished book.
Originally, I was attracted by the premise of the book, however the execution of it was a let down, mainly because the main characters thoughts and readings are beyond ridiculous. I can handle some absurdity, specially within erotic romances, but what I cannot candle is dumbness and this was so so dumb. I skipped many things, specially after the first half of the book. All the lame mob stuff is tedious.
I actually think, that with enough editing, this could be a decent read. As it stands, is not worth reading at all.
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Reading Progress
July 9, 2022
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Started Reading
July 11, 2022
– Shelved
July 11, 2022
– Shelved as:
e-read-erotic-romance
July 11, 2022
– Shelved as:
reviewed
July 11, 2022
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Finished Reading