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Owned by the Mob Boss by Ashley Hall
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it was ok
bookshelves: e-read-erotic-romance, reviewed

Actual Rating: 1.5 stars

This was really bad.

It needs so much editing that it is difficult to read for many, many reasons, including how incredibly repetitive it is. It is a rough draft not a finished book.
Originally, I was attracted by the premise of the book, however the execution of it was a let down, mainly because the main characters thoughts and readings are beyond ridiculous. I can handle some absurdity, specially within erotic romances, but what I cannot candle is dumbness and this was so so dumb. I skipped many things, specially after the first half of the book. All the lame mob stuff is tedious.

I actually think, that with enough editing, this could be a decent read. As it stands, is not worth reading at all.
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Reading Progress

July 9, 2022 – Started Reading
July 11, 2022 – Shelved
July 11, 2022 – Shelved as: e-read-erotic-romance
July 11, 2022 – Shelved as: reviewed
July 11, 2022 – Finished Reading

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