Rachel's Reviews > Mated Enemies

There was so much room for character development and a stronger plot, and this book fell short from every angle. For the first half of the book, the writing was so atrocious that I wasn’t sure if I’d be able to finish. Almost every paragraph had a phrase that ended with -ass. Crazy ass, schizo ass, tiny ass, etc. everything ended in ass and it was bothering me so much I wasn’t sure I’d finish. About 60% through, the writing changed and the book was tolerable. I wouldn’t recommend this book to anyone...