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content/outreach/stories/aiden/contents.lr

@@ -15,5 +15,6 @@ summary: Tor helped me learn new things. I'm in a country where you can get lock
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-Tor helped me learn new things. I'm in a country where you can get locked up for having different opinions than my government.
+Tor helped me learn new things. 
+I'm in a country where you can get locked up for having different opinions than my government.
 The internet would be only limited to watching the propaganda they serve me everyday even on streets...

content/outreach/stories/akio/contents.lr

@@ -11,8 +11,9 @@ title: Akio
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-summary: Use Tor to participate in grassroots anti-nuclear weapons activism. This is quite dangerous so Tor is absolutely essential.
+summary: I use Tor to participate in grassroots anti-nuclear weapons activism. This is quite dangerous so Tor is absolutely essential.
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-Use Tor to participate in grassroots anti-nuclear weapons activism. This is quite dangerous so Tor is absolutely essential.
+I use Tor to participate in grassroots anti-nuclear weapons activism. 
+This is quite dangerous so Tor is absolutely essential.

content/outreach/stories/alexis/contents.lr

@@ -15,8 +15,11 @@ summary: I use Tor Browser as my everyday browser, nearly 100% of the time. I am
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-I use Tor Browser as my everyday browser, nearly 100% of the time. I am in USA. I face minimum risk, except for corporate business tracking. During the past 4-5 years, I have used the Tor Browser to connect to "thousands" of sites.
+I use Tor Browser as my everyday browser, nearly 100% of the time. I am in the USA. 
+I face minimum risk, except for corporate business tracking. 
+During the past 4-5 years, I have used the Tor Browser to connect to "thousands" of sites.
 
-Tor has helped me to preserve my anonymity and protect my privacy, which are of great importance to me online. I don't recall the date I first used Tor. I would have to do an extensive search of my backup HDDs to identify the date, but it has been about 4-5 years, I think. Without Tor, I would feel like I had a hole in me, an empty feeling, uncomfortable, not good.
+Tor has helped me to preserve my anonymity and protect my privacy, which are of great importance to me online. 
+Without Tor, I would feel like I had a hole in me, an empty feeling, uncomfortable, not good.
 
 I cannot express in just a few words how much I love Tor.

content/outreach/stories/alva/contents.lr

@@ -16,4 +16,7 @@ summary: I am a trans-lesbian and I would rather decide who to tell this to.
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 I am a trans-lesbian and I would rather decide who to tell this to.
-Keeping my social and sexual lives separate. Mitigating risk of unnecessary exposure and judgement. I am able to be more confident talking about this with people I meet online. This has helped with my confidence offline too.
+Keeping my social and sexual lives separate. 
+Mitigating risk of unnecessary exposure and judgement. 
+I am able to be more confident talking about this with people I meet online. 
+This has helped with my confidence offline too.

content/outreach/stories/amani/contents.lr

@@ -19,4 +19,6 @@ summary: I think online security and privacy are CRITICAL to maintain a free soc
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 I think online security and privacy are CRITICAL to maintain a free society.
-I don't believe online security, privacy or anonymity are only for criminals, but are an inherent right in a democratic republic. I have never done anything remotely illegal online, I fervently believe that my personal data, my browsing habits, etc. are my business, and I refuse to have someone looking over my shoulder if I can prevent it at all.  Security and privacy are not just a right, but an obligation for all freedom-loving people.
+I don't believe online security, privacy or anonymity are only for criminals, but are an inherent right in a democratic republic. 
+I have never done anything remotely illegal online, I fervently believe that my personal data, my browsing habits etc. are my business, and I refuse to have someone looking over my shoulder if I can prevent it at all.  
+Security and privacy are not just a right, but an obligation for all freedom-loving people.

content/outreach/stories/biljana/contents.lr

@@ -14,15 +14,15 @@ category:
 activism
 freedom-of-information
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-summary: It helps me to stay anonymous on the internet and do research without being followed.
+summary: It helps me stay anonymous on the internet and do research without being followed.
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-It helps me to stay anonymous on the internet and do research without being followed.
+It helps me stay anonymous on the internet and do research without being followed.
 I am a left-wing political activist...
 Currently governments of nearly all states have passed or are planning on new police laws.
 These laws are against basic human rights and open possibilities of mass-surveillance.
-Thus technologies like Tor are essential not only for the people trying to stop these law aggravations but for all of us.
+Thus, technologies like Tor are essential not only for the people trying to stop these law aggravations but for all of us.
 I use Tor in my daily political work to stay a bit under the radar of secret agencies and police.
 An internet without Tor is an internet I wouldn't want to use for many things.
 Not only that I don't want to share all my personal data with random strange companies, I also don't want to face repression for legitimate human rights political work.

content/outreach/stories/branka/contents.lr

@@ -15,5 +15,7 @@ summary: I'm a doctor in a very political town. I have patients who work on legi
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-I'm a doctor in a very political town. I have patients who work on legislation that can mean billions of dollars to major telecom, social media, and search concerns.
-When I have to do research on diseases and treatment or look into aspects of my patients' histories, I am well aware that my search histories might be correlated to patient visits and leak information about their health, families, and personal lives. I use Tor to do much of my research when I think there is a risk of correlating it to patient visits.
+I'm a doctor in a very political town. 
+I have patients who work on legislation that can mean billions of dollars to major telecom, social media, and search concerns.
+When I have to do research on diseases and treatment or look into aspects of my patients' histories, I am well aware that my search histories might be correlated to patient visits and leak information about their health, families, and personal lives. 
+I use Tor to do much of my research when I think there is a risk of correlating it to patient visits.

content/outreach/stories/carmen/contents.lr

@@ -15,4 +15,5 @@ summary: I was a family physician and clinical psychiatrist for 25 years, often
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-I was a family physician and clinical psychiatrist for 25 years, often working with members of marginalized and persecuted groups. Being able to protect my patients' personal information was of paramount importance. 
+I was a family physician and clinical psychiatrist for 25 years, often working with members of marginalized and persecuted groups. 
+Being able to protect my patients' personal information was of paramount importance. 

content/outreach/stories/dakota/contents.lr

@@ -11,7 +11,6 @@ title: Dakota
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-privacy
 encryption
 
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@@ -20,4 +19,5 @@ summary: In a world in which the Patriot Act has removed basic protections guara
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 In a world in which the Patriot Act has removed basic protections guaranteed by the Fourth Amendment, US citizens have lost way too much in privacy rights to risk any transaction on an insecure platform.
-The lack of an enforceable privacy standard in the U. S. make caution necessary when dealing with any digital communication. I use Tor and other encrypted services and believe that all digital services and applications should be encrypted.
+The lack of an enforceable privacy standard in the U. S. make caution necessary when dealing with any digital communication. 
+I use Tor and other encrypted services and believe that all digital services and applications should be encrypted.

content/outreach/stories/diego/contents.lr

@@ -15,4 +15,5 @@ summary: I'm from Brazil, and I've been using it for over 3 years. Tor has helpe
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-I'm from Brazil, and I've been using it for over 3 years. Tor has helped me a lot in protecting me from fingerprinting on the web.
+I'm from Brazil, and I've been using it for over 3 years. 
+Tor Browser has helped me a lot in protecting me from fingerprinting on the web.

content/outreach/stories/ethan/contents.lr

@@ -14,9 +14,15 @@ category:
 freedom-of-information
 online-safety
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-summary: I am a father of two teenagers. As teenagers, they, or their friends :-), are bumping into issues regarding sex, drugs, social media issues, and bullying.
+summary: I am a father of two teenagers. As teenagers, they, or their friends, are bumping into issues regarding sex, drugs, social media, and bullying.
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-I am a father of two teenagers. As teenagers, they, or their friends :-), are bumping into issues regarding sex, drugs, social media issues, and bullying.
-They are pretty open about many issues and so I try to be up to date with research, information, and details if anything arises. I use Tor to do the research to basically avoid telling Google (and others) that my children have these issues. It would be unethical of any parent NOT to do so and expose their children’s issues to these corporations. I also encourage my children to use Tor for their research for the same reasons. (although they don't have the same attitude to privacy as I do).
+I am a father of two teenagers. 
+As teenagers, they, or their friends, are bumping into issues regarding sex, drugs, social media, and bullying.
+They are pretty open about many of these issues and so I try to be up to date with research, information, and details if anything arises. 
+I use Tor to do the research to basically avoid telling Google (and others) that my children have these issues. 
+
+It would be unethical of any parent NOT to do so and expose their children’s issues to these corporations. 
+I also encourage my children to use Tor for their research for the same reasons. 
+(Although they don't have the same attitude to privacy as I do).

content/outreach/stories/fumie/contents.lr

@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ title: Fumie
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-summary: Used Tor to obtain documents from Wikileaks.
+summary: I used Tor to obtain documents from Wikileaks.
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-Used Tor to obtain documents from Wikileaks, which helped expose local surveillance by military units of janitorial union organizing meetings, groups pressing for the rights of migrant workers, etc.
+I used Tor to obtain documents from Wikileaks, which helped expose local surveillance by military units of janitorial union organizing meetings, groups pressing for the rights of migrant workers etc.

content/outreach/stories/galla/contents.lr

@@ -18,5 +18,7 @@ summary: I am a simple user. I love privacy-related tools and I am very interest
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-I am a simple user. I love privacy-related tools and I am very interested in encryption, decryption and security.
-I use Tor for my privacy as well as to access region-restricted sites. I love Tor's system and everything that it stands for.
+I am a simple user. 
+I love privacy-related tools and I am very interested in encryption, decryption and security.
+I use Tor for my privacy as well as to access region-restricted sites. 
+I love Tor's system and everything that it stands for.

content/outreach/stories/hasim/contents.lr

@@ -18,4 +18,5 @@ summary: I decided to take back my privacy and I have been using Tor ever since.
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 I decided to take back my privacy and I have been using Tor ever since.
-It has given me peace of mind... It has been empowering. I no longer fear the internet and I have the Tor team to thank for that. Thank you so much for all the work you do.
+It has given me peace of mind... It has been empowering. 
+I no longer fear the internet and I have the Tor team to thank for that. 

content/outreach/stories/israa/contents.lr

@@ -18,5 +18,7 @@ summary: I'm in the UK. I do not face any direct threats or risks regarding my u
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-I'm in the UK. I do not face any direct threats or risks regarding my use of the internet, and solely use Tor to avoid mass surveillance of my browsing history.
-Although my physical well being is not threatened by the mass surveillance I mentally feel much more at ease knowing that my browsing history is protected by using Tor. Otherwise my ISP would have a full 24/7 record of my browsing which by law has to be kept by them for a full 12 months.
+I'm in the UK. 
+I do not face any direct threats or risks regarding my use of the internet, and solely use Tor to avoid mass surveillance of my browsing history.
+Although my physical well being is not threatened by the mass surveillance I mentally feel much more at ease knowing that my browsing history is protected by using Tor. 
+Otherwise my ISP would have a full 24/7 record of my browsing which by law has to be kept by them for a full 12 months.

content/outreach/stories/jackson/contents.lr

@@ -14,12 +14,12 @@ category:
 encryption
 press-freedom
 freedom-of-information
-online-safety
 
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 summary: Really, I personally don’t need to worry much about my privacy. But I use Tor to protect others.
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-Really, I personally don’t need to worry much about my privacy. But I use Tor to protect others.
+Really, I personally don’t need to worry much about my privacy. 
+But I use Tor to protect others.
 It is such an important issue for journalists and activists so I want to support strengthening privacy and encryption laws to serve all users.

content/outreach/stories/kai/contents.lr

@@ -13,11 +13,12 @@ category:
 
 encryption
 online-safety
-anti-censorship
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-summary: I live in Europe and am not by any means an important, critical or endangered person, but i have friends in other parts of the world tho whom anonymity and privacy through encryption is crucial. Encryption is the only way to ensure, they can securly voice their opinion.
+summary: I live in Europe and am not by any means an important, critical or endangered person, but I have friends in other parts of the world tho whom anonymity and privacy through encryption is crucial. Encryption is the only way to ensure, they can securly voice their opinion.
 
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-I live in Europe and am not by any means an important, critical or endangered person, but i have friends in other parts of the world tho whom anonymity and privacy through encryption is crucial. Encryption is the only way to ensure, they can securly voice their opinion. Even in some parts of Europe sharing your own opinion or beliefs on politics, religion, abortion, sexual orientation etc. is dangerous and can easily lead to severe consequences.
+I live in Europe and am not by any means an important, critical or endangered person, but I have friends in other parts of the world tho whom anonymity and privacy through encryption is crucial. 
+Encryption is the only way to ensure, they can securly voice their opinion. 
+Even in some parts of Europe sharing your own opinion or beliefs on politics, religion, abortion, sexual orientation etc. is dangerous and can easily lead to severe consequences.

content/outreach/stories/luca/contents.lr

@@ -19,4 +19,4 @@ summary: I strongly believe encryption is essential for a healthy democracy, for
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-I strongly believe encryption is essential for a healthy democracy, for the privacy of every human being on this planet  and to combat/reduce government abuse of power and mass surveillance.
+I strongly believe encryption is essential for a healthy democracy, for the privacy of every human being on this planet and to combat/reduce government abuse of power and mass surveillance.

content/outreach/stories/milena/contents.lr

@@ -11,12 +11,11 @@ title: Milena
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 category: freedom-of-information
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-summary: Stay outside of filter bubbles. Protect me from being tracked.
+summary: Tor helps me stay outside of filter bubbles and protects me from being tracked.
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-Stay outside of filter bubbles. Protect me from being tracked.
-Protect me from different identities being correlated via ip address or browser features.
-Raise my awareness for the ubiquity of Cloudflare.
+Tor helps me stay outside of filter bubbles and protects me from being tracked.
+Protects me from different identities being correlated via IP address or browser features.
 It enables me to access content I couldn't from my country's IP range.
 Onion services are the most reliable tool to keep access to devices behind one-way firewalls.

content/outreach/stories/nia/contents.lr

@@ -18,5 +18,7 @@ summary: Journalism isn't free and fair. You are free to say what you feel at th
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-Journalism isn't free and fair. You are free to say what you feel at the of risk job loss and prison for expressing anything contrary to the wishes of whoever is in power of your jurisdiction - you have that right to say it and suffer.
-All transactions must use encryption: e-mails, messages, hard drives, individual files, require encryption. Encryption is important because it protects the work of those who hold to account the ones in power.
+Journalism isn't free and fair. 
+You are free to say what you feel at the of risk job loss and prison for expressing anything contrary to the wishes of whoever is in power of your jurisdiction - you have that right to say it and suffer.
+All transactions must use encryption: e-mails, messages, hard drives, individual files, require encryption. 
+Encryption is important because it protects the work of those who hold to account the ones in power.

content/outreach/stories/noor/contents.lr

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-I live in Iran and the police state is vigorously spying on people. Without Tor we would be shut off from the world, no one hearing our voice.
+I live in Iran and the police state is vigorously spying on people. 
+Without Tor we would be shut off from the world, no one hearing our voice.

content/outreach/stories/pittiulaaq/contents.lr

@@ -15,5 +15,8 @@ summary: I live in the UK. I was incredibly disturbed by the Edward Snowden reve
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-I live in the UK. I was incredibly disturbed by the Edward Snowden revelations about NSA mass surveillance. This led me to start using the Tor browser.
-The UK Government's own legislation of DRIPA and the Investigatory Powers Act made it even more necessary in my opinion to protect my browsing history from the government's intrusive snooping. I use Tor on a daily basis, and also use a paid-for VPN service when not using Tor.
+I live in the UK. 
+I was incredibly disturbed by the Edward Snowden revelations about NSA mass surveillance. 
+This led me to start using the Tor browser.
+The UK Government's own legislation of DRIPA and the Investigatory Powers Act made it even more necessary in my opinion to protect my browsing history from the government's intrusive snooping. 
+I use Tor on a daily basis, and also use a paid-for VPN service when not using Tor.

content/outreach/stories/plinio/contents.lr

@@ -16,4 +16,6 @@ summary: I am a software developer and programming teacher and I live in Cuba.
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 I am a software developer and programming teacher and I live in Cuba.
-There are many sites with information that I need to be able to do my work that are blocked due to absurd laws. Even there are sites that use services and resources that are also blocked for my country. I use my browser with SwitchyProxy Omega in auto switch mode to be able to redirect blocked requests to the network and thus have a decent navigation.
+There are many sites with information that I need to be able to do my work that are blocked due to absurd laws. 
+Even there are sites that use services and resources that are also blocked for my country. 
+

content/outreach/stories/ren/contents.lr

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-Big corporations and companies have no morals and don't hesitate to share personal information for profit. Our data was shared without our permission from sources like our healthcare provider and employer.
-Even basic entertainment apps collect everything they can from our devices and sell that data to others.  Since all our devices know everything about us, having encrypted connections is one of the few ways that we can at least prevent the data that is already being stolen from being stolen again during its transfer.
+Big corporations and companies have no morals and don't hesitate to share personal information for profit. 
+Our data was shared without our permission from sources like our healthcare provider and employer.
+Even basic entertainment apps collect everything they can from our devices and sell that data to others.  
+Since all our devices know everything about us, having encrypted connections is one of the few ways that we can at least prevent the data that is already being stolen from being stolen again during its transfer.