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List of Football Academic All-America Team Members of the Year[edit]

List of Football Academic All-America Team Members of the Year (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

Nominator(s): TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:00, 19 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because the progress made during archive1 makes me feel that this should be featured-level with a few minor changes. TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:00, 19 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by MPGuy2824[edit]

  • Add a "(pictured in <year>)" for Danny Wuerffel since it seems to be from much later in his life. Check the same for the other images as well.
  • You can remove the bolding from the image captions, since the information is already present in the table.
  • Support promotion as the above are minor issues, and the first nomination was closed just before I indicated my support there. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 05:21, 19 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments[edit]

Comments by Staraction[edit]

  • Image review passed
    • All images have alt text
    • All images appropriately licensed (AGF on own work)
    • Images relevant to the text
    • Captions suggestion: instead of formatting with multiple lines, perhaps write a little prose? For instance, "Justin Herbert in 2021, who was the winner in 2018 and 2019". Otherwise, looks good.
  • Some prose comments
    • "For Division I, Justin Herbert is the most recent repeat winner." -> "Justin Herbert is the most recent repeat winner in Division I."
    • "Before the College Division was divided, its repeat winners included David Gubbrud, Chris Hatcher and Corte McGuffey repeated." -> "Before the College Division was divided, its repeat winners included David Gubbrud, Chris Hatcher and Corte McGuffey."
    • "The Football Academic All-America Team Member of the Year is the annual most outstanding singular college football athlete of the set of American football athletes selected for the Academic All-America Teams in a given year." -> "The annually-awarded Football Academic All-America Team Member of the Year is the most outstanding singular college football athlete selected for the Academic All-America Teams in a given year."
    • "The Academic All-America program recognizes combined athletic and academic excellence of the nation's top student-athletes because the All-America teams and team members of the year are selected based on excellence in both classroom achievement and athletic competition performance by the College Sports Communicators (CSC, known before the 2022–23 school year as College Sports Information Directors of America, or CoSIDA)." -> "Selected based on excellence in both classroom achievement and athletic competition performance by the College Sports Communicators (CSC, known before the 2022–23 school year as College Sports Information Directors of America, or CoSIDA), the Academic All-America program recognizes combined athletic and academic excellence of the nation's top student-athletes".

Thanks for your work @TonyTheTiger! Let me know if you have any questions / concerns. Staraction (talk | contribs) 19:41, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Support on images & prose. Staraction (talk | contribs) 22:37, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]