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Good articleAltes Stadthaus, Bonn has been listed as one of the Geography and places good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
October 6, 2012Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on September 26, 2012.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the Altes Stadthaus in Bonn was built for French occupation forces after World War I?

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 08:26, 6 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
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    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Nice article. Here are a few issues:

  • "It was mainly housed in the now-demolished section of the building.[8]" - it is?
  • Why is SPD and Cologne not linked?
  • "The report which was presented at the end of December recommended reuse of the already modified internal space housing the library, and creation of additional usable space up to a total of approximately 1600 m² by lowering the floor to street level and modifying stairway areas without changing the external appearance of the building, which is characteristic of government buildings of the 1920s, particularly in its blocky ground floor." - this sentence is very large--

Kürbis () 11:57, 6 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]