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Mainspring by Jay Lake
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did not like it

** spoiler alert ** Lake has, I'll admit, created a wonderfully interesting world, and oftentimes interesting worlds are at the heart of the fantasy/adventure genre. I want to explore it. But not like this.

What Lake seems frustratingly, maddeningly incapable of here is providing us with any reason to care about the people and situations occurring in his interesting world. I don't care if the Mainspring is rewound. I don't care if Hethor dies in the attempt. I don't care if his enemies thwart him, because I have as little reason to dislike them as I have to like Hethor. I don't care about the Chosen People, other than to be mildly repulsed by the seemingly casual racism with which they are portrayed**. I just don't care.

This book was too disappointing too many times. Its premises hit me on a lot of levels: Victoriana, airships, and steampunk? Check. Divides of power along hemispherical lines (otherwise known as imperialism)? Check. Religious/spiritual/magical schisms? God's language? Angels? Checkity check check. I'm even an amateur watch collector for chrissakes. If Lake can't get me into this book, I don't see how anybody could enjoy it.



**Tiny black apes who play drums and make big fires and teach our White scion invaluable lessons about spirituality and love while still regarding him as the leader of their life's quest? Come on. That's pretty repulsive.
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June 14, 2009 – Shelved
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June 27, 2009 – Finished Reading

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message 1: by Chip (new) - rated it 1 star

Chip Howell When you wrote: **Tiny black apes who play drums and make big fires and teach our White scion invaluable lessons about spirituality and love while still regarding him as the leader of their life's quest? Come on. That's pretty repulsive. That's the thing that actually stopped me from reading the book and tearing my paperback version in half (throwing the first half away) before finally deciding to finish it. Racism as a part of a story is an ugly fact and if it illuminates something of the story itself, it serves at least some dubious purpose, but willfully erasing an entire real-world-human population from even a fictional continent and replacing them with a real-world stereotype of those cultures is just...well...racist, and obviously says that this book was not intended to be read by people of a particular ancestral background.


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