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The Cruel Prince by Holly Black
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did not like it
bookshelves: 2018-tbr, read-2018, ya

I absolutely cannot believe I wasted time out of my freaking life to read this "book". I don't get the hype and I hate how relationships are portrayed in the story! Authors and reviewers here on Goodreads that I trusted trust raved about this book .... and I'm here lighting the fire so I can burn the pages.....

First of all... the writing is horrendous. It's the worst case of "tell, not show" I've ever seen (Twilight was better written than this): "I did this, she did that, now I'm gonna do this ...". There was no emotion in the writing, I did not feel any attachment toward the world of "Faerieland" and I couldn't connect with the protagonist, Jude, because I wanted to slap some sense into her the entire time : she acts recklessly, even when other people warn her repeatedly not to do the thing and for the first 200 pages she does nothing but complain, indulging in a self-pity party like there is no tomorrow. My heart bleeds 0_0.

Continuing - the other characters are 2D, the plot is non-existent for the first 200+ pages and the grand finale/epilogue everyone's been raving about....left me colder than a dead body dropped in Siberia. I could not care less.

An issue that had me concerned while reading this: the character who is heavily hinted as being the love interest: almost every scene in which he makes an appearance showcases how abusive he is, especially towards the MC and no one (from the reviews I have read) flags this as a major problem? . I have little patience for female (and male, for that matter) authors who write abusive love interests and then absolve them of all the nasty acts they have perpetrated . In the world of endemic sexual harassment and abusive behaviour, in the world of #metoo and the horrifying stories of women being treated like less than dirt, why do we fall for this type of characters? Why do we keep buying these books? And why do we praise the authors who write them???????.

I've wasted enough electricity writing a review for a book that will surely be my worst read of the year.
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Reading Progress

December 8, 2017 – Shelved as: 2018-tbr
December 8, 2017 – Shelved
December 8, 2017 – Shelved as: to-read
December 22, 2017 – Shelved (Other Hardcover Edition)
December 22, 2017 – Shelved as: to-read (Other Hardcover Edition)
January 16, 2018 – Started Reading
January 16, 2018 – Shelved as: read-2018
January 16, 2018 – Shelved as: ya
January 16, 2018 – Finished Reading

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message 1: by Andrea (new)

Andrea I'm so glad I read your review because based on the synopsis I almost hit to-read. In this day and age especially I wouldn't want to read about an abusive love interest in any way. I've been finding so many of these characters and I have to say things like this are what add to the problem in the first place. I won't condone a book glorifying abuse.


message 2: by Afoxamongstars (last edited Jan 30, 2018 02:58PM) (new) - added it

Afoxamongstars he's not exactly the love interest, but Black kinda hints at it and other reviewers are jumping on that bandwagon🙄. I expected intelligent writing, a kickass plot and a heroine I would love. instead I got to ask "what the fuck out loud" every other page😐


message 3: by Andrea (new)

Andrea Afoxamongstars wrote: "he's not exactly the love imterest, but Black kinda hints at it and other reviewers are jumping on that bandwagon🙄. I expected intelligent writing, a kickass plot and a heroine I would love. instea..."

Oh ok. lol That's always a bad sign. It's so disappointing that so many promising books end up having the same bad themes nowadays. Abuse is the new romance for some reason, and strong somehow equals a heroine that's a doormat for it.


Afoxamongstars yeah, I don't get that either😐


Brenda Waworga PREACH!! I dont get why people gave this book 5⭐ really everything makes me angry and the fact she just forgot everything Cardan and his minion did to her and kissed him frustating me not to mention alot of others things too


Afoxamongstars Brenda wrote: "PREACH!! I dont get why people gave this book 5⭐ really everything makes me angry and the fact she just forgot everything Cardan and his minion did to her and kissed him frustating me not to mentio..."

Yeah, I don't get it either. It's really shocking when this book is so problematic. And then the same people go and criticise the smallest of details in other books that depict healthy relationships.


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

this book isn't just problematic it's also clique and boring I honestly don't understand how it has such high ratings


message 8: by Alice (new)

Alice I only read a bit of this book, but Cardan was bullying her right?


Jaimie Preach!!! I thought I was the only one who had these issues with this book!


Devann oh my god, so much this! i was just sitting there reading it like are you SERIOUSLY putting her in a love triangle with two asshole guys that have been bullying her for her entire life???? is this really the choice we've made???? i managed to talk myself into giving it 2 stars but jfc when will we get past the abusive male love interests

[and i mean, i know people might SAY he's not a love interest but ...he is ...and they're going to spend the entire rest of the series like ...staring at each other while alternately thinking about how much they hate and want to bone each other and it's going to be awful and i can't do it lmao I CANNOT]


message 11: by Calista (new) - added it

Calista Thank you for sharing.


message 12: by Yoda (new) - rated it 3 stars

Yoda I regret buying this book.


Khrys ♡《TheWaffleGirl》 Thanks for the review! I was about to read this but I'd rather take your word for it. I can't stand books with abusive love interests!


message 14: by Afoxamongstars (last edited Feb 13, 2018 03:14AM) (new) - added it

Afoxamongstars Sim wrote: "this book isn't just problematic it's also clique and boring I honestly don't understand how it has such high ratings"

Definitely! But I'm guessing that's the appeal of it being clique-y: it's easier to talk about people (especially negatively) than to discuss ideas in an intelligent fashion.


Afoxamongstars Khrys wrote: "Thanks for the review! I was about to read this but I'd rather take your word for it. I can't stand books with abusive love interests!"

Save yourself the money and time:))


Afoxamongstars Yoda wrote: "I regret buying this book."

Me too 0_0


Afoxamongstars Calista wrote: "Thank you for sharing."

Thanks for reading:)


Afoxamongstars Alice wrote: "I only read a bit of this book, but Cardan was bullying her right?"

Yes, along with other characters - I already forgot the names of the other douchebags


Afoxamongstars Devann wrote: "oh my god, so much this! i was just sitting there reading it like are you SERIOUSLY putting her in a love triangle with two asshole guys that have been bullying her for her entire life???? is this ..."

Yup, that was my main gripe with this book/future series. How do publishers OK this????


Diana 100% agree! I felt so detached from the characters and the plot and OMG, I DO NOT UNDERSTAND WHY PEOPLE LOVE CARDAN??? I mean, it comes down to preference, but he’s literally such a horrible character with like, no redeemable qualities??? I really want to see how Holly Black’ll portray him in the next book 🤔


Afoxamongstars I could not care less about what happens. I'm really digging my heels in here, because I feel people shouldn't up her book sales count. Maybe this way authors will finally understand not to write such atrocities


Kallie (The Book Binge) Agree with you 100%, I definitely cannot see the hype after reading the crap I did.


Jamie Dacyczyn SAME. All the sames!


message 24: by Yami (new) - added it

Yami By p. 35 and i stopped, and i have a feeling u would have agreed, i truly can't understand the hype


message 25: by Laura (new) - added it

Laura Your review is great!!
I was suspicious this book was the type to have abusive relationships. It seems like those sorts of relationships are really popular in books, especially YA. I hated The Darkest Part of The Forest, so I had a feeling this would suck just as much!


message 26: by Christina (new)

Christina First review I’ve seen where someone talked about how bad the writing is!!!!! YES! It reads like an angsty 13 year olds diary entry


Milda Page Runner This:
Oh, and the thing that really gets me going: one of the characters that is hinted at being a possible love interest: he is abusive and no one fucking bats an eye (in the book or in the reviews I've seen). I am so done with female (and male, for that matter) authors who write abusive love interests and then absolve them of all the shit that they've done . In the world of endemic sexual harassment and abusive behaviour, in the world of #metoo and the horrifying stories of women being treated like less than dirt, why do we fall for this type of characters? why do we keep buying these books? and why do we praise the authors who write them??????? .

Finally! I'm shocked how there are hundreds of positive reviews and noone seems to be at all disturbed by this.


Amber Brooo I agree with a lot of the criticism of this book but totally disagree with the sentiment that Jude was being whiny. I would have such a fucking hard time if it was me that was bellow average in so many ways, as a kid most of all. Also imagine living with immortals. I'm scared of death so that really got to me. Like pls I want to live longer too.


Heronpoxed FINALLY SOMEONE WITH AN OPEN MIND! Couldn’t agree more!


message 30: by Kiara (new) - rated it 1 star

Kiara YESSSSSS! I will never understand why people keep recommending this book.
The writing is absolute shite!
The character development is ✨nonexistent✨
The character personalities are inconsistent as is the plot!
They were identical twins ffs and
let’s not talk about her sisters arranged marriage to that first guy that showed her ‘affection’ and didn’t treat her like ‘trash’ because he ‘saved’ her from the bullying and abuse and almost giving all control of her body to that shitty group of friends! And he still got with her knowing he was going to get with her twin! The abuse and extent to which this toxic group resorted to bullying her and her sister is unreal and completely insane.

To conclude, If you like this book, stay the fuck away from me.


P.s.
I read this a while ago so I don’t remember their names


Richa Kurian YES YOU'VE LITERALLY STRUNG EVERY THOUGHT I HAD WHILE READING THIS BOOK INTO ONE REVIEW.


Mrs. Henry I came here to see why so many people have loved this book. I haven’t finished it yet and I am frustrated. She is an idiot. How can she like that guy and kiss him with so many clues and situations?!? I don’t know if I can finish this... I don’t know...


Caitlin Persephone I hate books that romanticise abuse, I completely agree, I was shocked by the positive reviews.


Too much imagination FINALLY! I finally found someone who addressed the bullying and abusive behavior from Cardan! I don't get why people like him 😭😭 what is happening


message 35: by Nina (new) - rated it 1 star

Nina Thank you so much for this comment. I felt the same way. I only read it to the end because it was so hyped in TikTok. I shouldn't have.


Kayleigh Dunstan I've finally just finished this book and you have put into words, exactly how I feel! I struggled to read this, and I never struggle with books. I won't be reading the next 2. Don't always trust booktok #WorstReadOfTheYear


message 37: by Bea (new) - rated it 1 star

Bea amen to all of this


message 38: by Kate (new) - rated it 1 star

Kate The straight-up praise for domestically violent and abusive characters was nauseating, as was the justifications for the abuse (that "they're not human, so it's different!").


Aleksandra All Cardan did was throw her in the river. The rest of the bulling Jude gets from his friends. On the other hand, she:
- kidnapped him
- threatened him
- manipulated him
- literally made him her slave
They're both awful. That is the point of this book!


Adriana H Cardan is a walking bouquet of red flags. Ripping off the wings of a fae, shoving her in a river, that disturbing ass note with her name all over it?! Absolutely not okay


myfriendscallmeAng I literally have the EXACT same feelings about this book! (If u want you can also see my review I posted a few minutes ago.)


message 42: by Harper (new)

Harper Hinds I JUST GENUINELY DONT GET WHY THERE IS SO MUCH PRAISE FOR THIS BOOK


Corina This is are all extremely valid reasons to hate this book but I cannot deny it sort of falls into the realm of guilty pleasures. Obviously in a real life scenario this relationship is a no go, both parties definitely should have restraining orders on each other and probably some prison time but as a form of entrainment I can’t deny I was entertained. You kind of need to have a taste for dark things though and separate fiction and reality, understanding being treated poorly in real life (unless possibly as a *consensual game* but that’s also up for debate) should never be tolerated..


message 44: by Jessica (new)

Jessica OKAY YKW YOU ARE WRONG AS HEECCCCCCCC. I may have only read the first 1/3 and am here to get spoilers but don't even get me started. Jude is not annoying, she is a girlboss. She stands up for her values and whta she believs in. She is write to push that dumb brat Cardan because he is just bad. Thsi cringy corny fire dump of a faerie does not get to push Taylyn or whatever her name is around. He doesn't get to push anyone around. SHE ATE SHE DEVOURED SHE LEFT NO CRUMBS SHE SHOWED HIM WHO'S THE PERIOD GIRLBOSS PERIODDDD.

Also yeah Cardan is a red flag he may as well just transform himself into a tomato with his fairy powers or whatever but that's HOT. Who cares if he's like weird and nasty and cringy because the author said he's HOT and HOT is better. Cardan is BETTER because he's HOT. PERIOD.


message 45: by Grace (new) - rated it 1 star

Grace I got 20% into the book and wondered when the love interest was going to show up. I googled it and was shocked and appalled it was this abusive bully.


HJreads couldn't agree more


message 47: by Anna (new)

Anna I’m 35 pages in and I cannot stand the way the book’s written. I don’t know if I can finish it.


message 48: by Lisa (new) - rated it 1 star

Lisa you ate this


Mystery, She Read Thank you!! I DNFed so fast once the abuse started. I will forever rant about how horrible this book is. How does it have such good reviews


message 50: by Tayte (new) - rated it 1 star

Tayte Bilton Literally couldn’t have said it better myself. Your review has better writing than the book itself. You killed it


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