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An Emily Dickinson Mystery #1

Because I Could Not Stop for Death

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Emily Dickinson and her housemaid, Willa Noble, realize there is nothing poetic about murder in this first book in an all-new series from USA Today bestselling and Agatha Award-winning author Amanda Flower.

January 1855 Willa Noble knew it was bad luck when it was pouring rain on the day of her ever-important job interview at the Dickinson home in Amherst, Massachusetts. When she arrived late, disheveled with her skirts sodden and filthy, she'd lost all hope of being hired for the position. As the housekeeper politely told her they'd be in touch, Willa started toward the door of the stately home only to be called back by the soft but strong voice of Emily Dickinson. What begins as tenuous employment turns to friendship as the reclusive poet takes Willa under her wing.

Tragedy soon strikes and Willa's beloved brother, Henry, is killed in a tragic accident at the town stables. With no other family and nowhere else to turn, Willa tells Emily about her brother's death and why she believes it was no accident. Willa is convinced it was murder. Henry had been very secretive of late, only hinting to Willa that he'd found a way to earn money to take care of them both. Viewing it first as a puzzle to piece together, Emily offers to help, only to realize that she and Willa are caught in a deadly game of cat and mouse that reveals corruption in Amherst that is generations deep. Some very high-powered people will stop at nothing to keep their profitable secrets even if that means forever silencing Willa and her new mistress....

336 pages, Paperback

First published September 20, 2022

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Amanda Flower

54 books2,667 followers
Amanda Flower is a USA Today bestselling and Agatha Award-winning author of over thirty-five mystery novels. Her novels have received starred reviews from Library Journal, Publishers Weekly, and Romantic Times, and she had been featured in USA Today, First for Women, and Woman’s World. She currently writes for Penguin-Random House (Berkley), Kensington, Hallmark Publishing, Crooked Lane Books, and Sourcebooks. In addition to being a writer, she was a librarian for fifteen years. Today, Flower and her husband own a farm and recording studio, and they live in Northeast Ohio with their two adorable cats.

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Profile Image for Kay.
2,179 reviews1,101 followers
November 13, 2023
More than a cozy!

I'm a fan of Amanda Flower cozy mysteries and The Magic Garden series is my fav! When I saw her new historical fiction cozy I knew I want to try it. This is Emily Dickinson historical mystery which I believe is going to be a series. The story is told by Emily's new twenty-year-old housemaid, Willa Noble.

It's 1855 Amherst, MA, not long after Willa Noble started working for the Dickinsons, her brother, Henry who is a stable boy died in an accident at the village livery. After his death, Willa receives Henry's diary and comes to believe he was murdered. Emily thinks they should start looking into Henry's death.

This was a delightful read, especially the characters. I like the description of Amherst, Main Street, and the townspeople. Emily, her sister Lavinia and Willa also took the train to see Mr. Dickinson, MA House Rep in DC. The Trip to DC and Mount Vernon is a fun little travelogue. The book does touch heavily on slavery and gender roles.

I guessed the whodunit part quite early but still had fun with the book and of course, had to see if I had the right suspect! 3.5⭐

Thank you Berkley Publishing Group and Netgalley for this DRC.
Published Sep 20, 2022
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1,044 reviews707 followers
September 23, 2022
Amanda Flower brings great characterization and world-building to Because I Could Not Stop for Death , the first book in the Emily Dickinson historical mystery series. The novel begins in January 1855 with Willa Noble applying for a job at the Dickinson home in Amherst, Massachusetts. Despite being late, drenched, and covered in mud, Willa gets the job as a housemaid with Emily’s help. Tragedy strikes when Willa’s brother Henry is killed in an accident at the town’s stables. Willa tells Emily about it as well as her belief that it wasn’t an accident, but murder. Emily offers to help her investigate.

Mixing real-life individuals like the Dickinson family with fictional characters such as Willa and Henry made this an engaging historical fiction story. Both Willa and Emily are well-developed characters. Willa has a tendency to sacrifice herself for family and duty and is compassionate, hard working, and loyal, but lacks self-confidence. Emily is curious, aloof, writes furiously, and is willing to use her family’s wealth and prestige to get what she wants. While Emily didn’t change much during the course of the novel, Willa was more dynamic and grew more confident as the story unfolded.

This historical mystery brings to life the conflicting sentiments that existed in America at the time. This included how people in different social classes were treated and viewed, the attitudes toward and expectations of women, and the need for some to carry papers everywhere they went to prove they were free. The novel seems to be well-researched including the travel to and experiences in Washington D.C. that felt right for the times.

There are a few plot twists, but I was able to discern the antagonist relatively early with the clues provided. Despite this, I enjoyed the story and felt transported to the mid 1800’s. Based on my limited knowledge of the poet Emily Dickinson, she seemed to be well portrayed in this fictional portrayal of an early period in her life. The story is moving and suspenseful at times, but the pace felt somewhat slow. Additional themes woven into the story include grief, protecting others, bullying, politics, greed, and family relationships.

Overall, this story is engaging, well-written, and well-researched. This book is somewhat darker than most of the cozy mysteries I have read by this author. Those that enjoy historical mysteries, amateur sleuths, or are interested in Emily Dickinson will likely enjoy this novel. I am looking forward to reading the next book in the series.

Berkley Publishing Group and Amanda Flower provided a complimentary digital ARC of this novel via NetGalley. This is my honest review. Opinions are mine alone and are not biased in any way. Publication date is currently set for September 20, 2022. This review was originally posted at Mystery and Suspense Magazine.

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My 3.55 rounded to 4 stars review is coming soon.
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1,579 reviews229 followers
October 30, 2022
I’ve enjoyed several cozy mysteries by Amanda Flower, and I am glad to see she has branched into this historical fiction mystery. I love books that are inspired by and include real people, so I am excited to see where this mystery series about Emily Dickinson goes. I liked all the characters and definitely see a lot of potential for future books. Willa finds herself hired to be a maid in the prestigious Dickinson household but just when things are going well she learns that her brother has died and the circumstances seem mysterious. Emily Dickinson tells her they must figure out what happened and much to Willa’s surprise she wasn’t just saying that and the two women begin their amateur sleuthing. The mystery wasn’t as tricky as I would have hoped, but I did like that it included the issue of slavery and the Underground Railroad.
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852 reviews690 followers
October 13, 2022
This book is the first in a new historical mystery series with poet Emily Dickinson and her fictional maid Willa as main characters. Set during the politically turbulent time just prior to the Civil War, this mystery finds Emily and Willa investigating the death of Willa's brother. Police say it was an accident, but Willa believes he was murdered, and Emily's inquisitive nature leads them into an investigation of their own.

The book is well-researched and I enjoyed the historical details, though the mystery itself isn't very strong or complex. I also felt like the characters were dry, and their dialogue was stiff and simplistic. The series has potential with such a haunting and curious character as Emily Dickinson, but this first book fell a bit flat for me.

Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for providing me a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
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Author 26 books3,319 followers
May 11, 2022
Because I Could Not Stop for Death is USA Today bestselling author Amanda Flower’s first foray into historical mystery, and she acquits herself beautifully. She brings beloved American poet Emily Dickinson to life in a nuanced portrayal, giving us glimpses of the brilliant literary mind at work, turning over ideas and phrases, even as she teams up with an able and sympathetic maid to solve a murder. Well-researched, richly textured, and skillfully plotted, readers will fall for Flower’s lyrical mystery—word, verse, and stanza.
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653 reviews141 followers
January 19, 2023
Amanda Flower treats her readers to an historical mystery in this first book of her An Emily Dickinson Mystery series. Because I Could Not Stop for Death begins in January 1855. Through careful and thorough research she has penned a different type of cozy mystery than what we are used to from her previous work. Amanda has blended fiction with facts and used an actual poet, Emily Dickinson and a fictional character Willa Noble to be main characters in this new series. The outcome was a story that seemed so real that I felt I was there in the pages of this novel with the characters.

The story starts out with a slow build but then shortly after the first chapter the murder takes place and the rest of the book is about finding out who the killer is. We wait till the very end before we get to find out whodunnit. I enjoy the anticipation of waiting till the end to learn the identity of the killer. I can’t wait for book two to be released.

Readers of Cozy Mystery, Historical Fiction and fans of the Author will love this book. I highly recommend it.

I borrowed a copy of this book from the local library. All thoughts and opinions shared here are my own.

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1,804 reviews79 followers
November 21, 2022
Because I Could Not Stop for Death imagines Emily Dickinson pre-hermitude investigating a murder with her maid Willa. It was serviceable historical fiction, though like many historians, Flower uses Dickinson as a blank slate upon which to sketch her own ideas. The culture of antislavery and proslavery politics is not historically accurate, which was a real drawback for me as an antislavery historian. If the nominally free states were as antislavery as they were in historical fiction, the Civil War would not have occurred. Neither would Congress's fugitive slave laws been so eagerly enforced in the North. You can't have a high-stakes as Flower presents it here with her concurrent world of populist antislavery. Anyway, this novel was fine, I didn't hate it, but ultimately the characters failed to reach me, and there were enough ahistorical drawbacks to make the story unbelievable.
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Author 1 book437 followers
September 26, 2022
I’m a big fan of Emily Dickinson’s poetry, and my favorite poem by her is the one used in the title of this new cozy mystery from Amanda Flower:

Because I could not stop for Death—
He kindly stopped for me—
The Carriage held but just Ourselves—
And Immortality…

So of course the title grabbed my attention right away … and then I saw the cover and was completely in love. When I found out that this new series features Emily Dickinson and her maid Willa Noble as amateur sleuths, well, I absolutely had to read this book!

We begin our story from Willa’s point of view, as she is dodging a torrential downpour on her way to interview for a new position at the Dickinson home in Amherst, Massachusetts. She’s just as surprised to be hired as the housekeeper is to hire her, but Emily’s decisive intervention on behalf of Willa during that interview sets the tone for their relationship forthwith. As Willa quickly becomes an important part of the Dickinsons’ small staff, she suffers a great tragedy – the loss of her brother – and Emily intervenes once again. While Emily and Willa at first may seem an unlikely investigative team, you will soon find yourself unable to imagine them as anything else. I found their relationship dynamic to be fascinating – a young woman and her maid…. a pair of amateur sleuths … and a form of friendship that straddles both incarnations.

Along with the clever mystery – perhaps because of it – we are also treated to intriguing historical details into Massachusetts & US politics of the day, including both the courageous personalities of the Underground Railroad and the cowardly & evil people who made such bravery necessary. We also get unique insight into Emily Dickinson as a woman, as a daughter, as a sister, and I very much enjoyed these glimpses into the real person, even as many of the scenarios we encounter are of course fictional. For as much as I love her poems, I’ve never really taken the time to read much about her as a historical figure but after meeting her on the pages of Because I Could Not Stop for Death I want to learn more.

Bottom Line: Because I Could Not Stop for Death is the kind of book you want to curl up with on a rainy day. Or a snowy day. Or a completely sunny day…because you shouldn’t let the weather stop you from reading this delightful cozy (though the former two options fit the mood of the book better). The combination of actual historical individuals with fictional ones, the juxtaposition of classes & gender roles, the tension of life for freedmen and escaped slaves alike… it all results in a captivating story that will keep you absorbed and engaged throughout. Add a dash of romance for Willa (if she’ll only open her heart to the man who loves her), and I’m looking forward to more books in this series!

(I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book)

first reviewed at Reading Is My SuperPower
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1,881 reviews180 followers
August 11, 2022
This is not the fluffy, cutesy cozy books you might be use to from this author. This is a historical mystery so it has some darker themes. It's set in 1855 so it's before the civil war, there is a lot of slavery talk, those for and against. The MC's are Emily Dickenson and her new maid Willa Noble. When Willa's family member is killed and she doesn't think that it was an accident like everyone else thinks, Emily decides they should investigate. 

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2,202 reviews
October 2, 2022
This was terrific. The author's use of poet Emily Dickinson as one of the main characters in this historical murder mystery was inspired. Makes you want to read more about such an iconic American poet.
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2,054 reviews47 followers
February 13, 2023
I went into this not knowing what to expect exactly but I love the author and will read anything she writes. I know nothing about Emily Dickinson beyond that she’s a poet so this was a fun way to learn about her. This story was done so well and was so easy to read that I flew through it. I am happy to say that I fell for some of the red herrings and was completely wrong. Willa was a great character and I’m looking forward to reading her next adventure with Emily.
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208 reviews37 followers
September 20, 2022
Thank you to NetGalley and Berkley Publishing for allowing me to read this ARC!

Content Warning: death, murder, violence, animal cruelty, racism, misogyny.


Willa Noble is over the moon when she's employed as a housemaid by the Dickinsons. It isn't by chance that she is hired, however: it's Emily Dickinson herself who instructs the head maid to take Willa on. Not much time has passed when tragedy strikes, and Willa's brother, Henry, is killed in what the police are calling an accident. Emily and Willa suspect that something else is afoot, however, and with the help of her eccentric employer, Willa is determined to find out who killed her brother -- at any cost.

What is it about Emily Dickinson that still fascinates us to this day? Her rich, private inner life? The way she still remains somewhat shrouded in mystery, even after all this time? We are always looking for a glimpse into her world, however small. When I picked up Because I Could Not Stop for Death, that's what I was hoping for, in spite of the fact that it takes place from the point of view of her maid -- an insight into Emily's secretive world. Disappointingly enough, though, we never quite get that chance.

To start with, all of the characters in this book are, sadly, strangely shallow. Many of them feel like caricatures, and despite the fact that Flower attempts to add depth to them through stories of their backgrounds, it does little to enrich them or add to their personalities. Willa, our main character, suffers from this same problem too -- although we're seeing everything happening through her eyes, all of her thoughts and observations feel rudimentary. Even now, I'm not exactly sure what I'd list as her character traits. Emily, Willa's brother, the rest of the Dickinson family, and, essentially, every character in these pages has a dearth of charisma.

The plot and mystery itself are basic, never able to rise above the average, everyday mystery you might pick up. The historical setting is certainly well-researched, but the stilted dialogue doesn't transport you to the era, but instead makes it feel as if everyone is clunky and awkward. Emily's dialogue suffers the most from this, probably because there are attempts at capturing her unique way of writing through her voice, but it just doesn't work. Willa and Emily claim to be investigating the death of Willa's brother, but the steps they take to do this are basic, never really fleshed-out. The "investigation" doesn't really yield any interesting clues or hints that help the reader to make their own assumptions.

Ultimately, this book just doesn't succeed in what it sets out to do. The questions raised here, about class and race, are good, but as with the rest, underdeveloped and overstated. The writing is so blunt, so set on making sure you're understanding what's going on, that it seems to imply the reader is too stupid to figure it out.

Not for me, but I'm sure there are many people out there who will enjoy the historical setting and time period, which Flower pulls off pretty well!
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395 reviews22 followers
May 25, 2023
Willa Noble has just started working as a servant in Dickenson home when she learns that her brother Henry has been killed in an accident. But Willa and the daughter of her employer Emily Dickenson suspect that Henry has actually been murdered. With Emily's help and encouragement, Willa learns the truth and that her brother was involved in a very noble cause. This was entertaining and interesting. I enjoyed the assertive personality of Emily. She helped Willa be able to stand up for herself. I'm looking forward to reading the next book of this new series.
621 reviews7 followers
December 22, 2022
This is the most poorly crafted mystery novel I've ever read. The protagonist (who is not Emily Dickinson, by the way) is given a diary which has most of the answers to the mystery she's trying to solve, except she refuses to read the diary for 90% of the book. Yeah, yeah, yeah, she's emotional and it's a last link to her dead brother, but COME ON. Then, when she finally decides it just might be a good idea to read the book full of clues to her brother's murder, it very conveniently gets stolen.

Ugh. I just wanted to punch her. So infuriating. Then, in the last 5% of the book, she simply wanders around town asking all sorts of people very loud, public questions about her brother's murder, making herself an obvious target. But does that occur to her? Of course not.

Finally, rather than uncovering any clues or solving the murder, she gets a mysterious note, late at night, telling her to come to a secluded location, and she does it! When she arrives -- gasp -- it was all a trick! Who coulda guessed?!? The murderer beans her over the head and tells her the solution to the mystery. Luckily, Emily Dickinson is there to save the day. Also, her kinda-sorta policeman boyfriend arrives in the nick of time.

Honestly, this was just so boring and contrived and excruciatingly slow. And of course the bad guy is very, very obvious early on in the book. By the 50% mark I had switched from reading-for-enjoyment to hate-reading. It was that bad. Also, the protagonist just wandered around having interactions with townspeople, which showed period detail, which I'm certain the author found really interesting, but which slowed the plot to an absolutely glacial pace.

My biggest question is why the author made the decision to bill this as an Emily Dickinson mystery, but not make Dickinson the protagonist. I get that it would have been harder to get the voice of Dickinson right, to really inhabit her, but this really felt like a bait-and-switch. It didn't help that I found Dickinson to be condescending and oblivious to what life might possibly be like for her maid. And she kept putting the maid into awkward situations, which were very likely to get her fired and thrown into penury and destitution and homeless. So no big deal. Let's do exactly what Emily suggests! It was uncomfortable to read and by the end of it, I hated Emily Dickinson. (And I love Emily Dickinson.) The good news was that I hated all the other characters, too. Lavinia was absolutely vile. The protagonist was a drip. Everyone was horrible.

And now let's talk about race. This book's plot (what little exists of it) hinges on the underground railroad. As such, the book is filled with white people with good intentions and anachronistic views, helping out the poor Black people. (I do realize that there were a lot of white people who helped runaway slaves and who were abolitionists, but all the white people in this book seem to have stellar 21st century mindsets. There was only a single character who was pro-slavery until we find out he was trying to throw people off his trail because he's actually a conductor on the underground railroad. If so many people actually agreed that slavery should be abolished, it would've happened a lot sooner. Sadly, that was not the case, and the author's choice to whitewash history is gross.) The only Black people -- there were two -- in the story seemed to be there to appreciate the kind-hearted white people. And felt icky to read what was essentially white savior narrative.

This book is BAD. Save yourself some time and choose something else to read. The phone book, for instance. It would be more interesting.
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Author 18 books159 followers
July 12, 2022
Disclaimer: Amanda is my friend and so I'm going to rate all her books five stars. :-)

This book is a departure from Amanda's usual work. I do believe her cozy readers will enjoy this one, but they will need to expect that it's not nearly as humorous. This is a serious historical mystery. Willa, the main character, is still growing into her personality, and she's stunned by her grief. The book begins when Willa accepts a job with the Dickinson family in Amherst. Shortly thereafter, her brother Henry dies in an accident with a horse. At first it seems like a tragic mishap. But then Willa gets close to her mistress, the poet Emily Dickinson, and the two realize Henry's death was purposeful. This story is utterly engrossing and impeccably researched (I expect no less from Amanda, who's a former librarian). It is written with sensitivity and grace. Dickinson herself is portrayed in her younger years, before she became a recluse. I loved that this book broke Emily out of her stereotype and rounded her out as a person. I'm looking forward to more in this series.
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891 reviews82 followers
September 20, 2022
Are you looking for an intense book that will keep you completely consumed and at the edge of your seat the entire time? Because I Could Not Stop for Death, is the book you need to read!

WHOA! What did I just read? Amanda Flower, you are a powerhouse and a force to be reckoned with.

Now, we have all heard of Amanda Flower, correct? Flower has over 35 mystery novels out and is a USA Today best-selling author and also the recipient of the Agatha Award.

I have read quite a few of Flowers previous books and have always enjoyed them! I would describe her previous work as cozy mysteries but Because I Could Not Stop for Death has broken the mold. I have never read a book quite like this and I can tell you I absolutely loved it!

Because I Could Not Stop for Death is book one in An Emily Dickinson Mystery Series and even though I have just finished, I am already anxiously awaiting book two!

I will tell you this is NOT a cozy mystery and has some pretty dark content but if you love a great murder mystery (and historical at that!) than you will enjoy this storyline as I did !

Five Stars!

Thank you Berkley, Amanda Flower and Netgalley for trusting me to read and review this incredible book prior to the big release, in exchange for an honest review!

Many well wishes to Flower, I was always a fan but this one just set the bar for what is to come !
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Author 2 books83 followers
January 21, 2023
I rather enjoyed this, though it dragged a bit in the middle, I still found this a well written mystery. Some of the writing felt stilted and off, and a few characters annoyed me (Mrs. O'Brien for example) and I found the ending nicely wrapped up with potential but unsure of a sequel. I'm new to reading Amanda Flowers work, and while the religious themes within irritated me (forcing a young woman to church after she lost her brother is just all kinds of wrong especially if she has no interest in church) and the sexism was on point for the time period, this was otherwise a really decent mystery with a hint of suspense flung in. I'm giving this a strong 4.5 ⭐.
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1,041 reviews31 followers
October 4, 2022
This was a very interesting read. I love the whole idea of Emily Dickinson as a sleuth although Willa, her maid is the real central character, and it is her brother that is murdered, and starts the ladies on an unusual friendship and partnership. It was a little easier to buy into as anyone who has ever read anything about Emily Dickinson would know that she was definitely considered unconventional. It is obvious that meticulous research about the Dickinsons, the time period and the Underground Railroad was conducted and they make a wonderful backdrop for our mystery. I really enjoyed this book. It struck me while reading that the events leading up to the Civil War seems way too similar in feeling to events in the United States today. In that regard also, the book was very thorough provoking.
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1,992 reviews596 followers
October 12, 2022
1855 Amherst, Massachusetts

This historical mystery series is off to a good start!

Initially, I had a difficult time seeing a more outgoing view of poet Emily Dickinson. Love that the author explained in the afterward that the typical visions of a hermit like Emily are from her later days.

Fictional maid Willa Noble is new to the Dickinson household when tragedy strikes. Emily quickly sees an adventure and a chance to solve a mystery. Emily and Willa are an unlikely pair, but a strong one, as they work together to learn the identity of a murderer.

Look forward to continuing the series.

My gratitude to publisher Berkley for a complimentary NetGalley copy of the novel. I was not required to post a review and all opinions expressed are my own.
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642 reviews1 follower
September 10, 2022
A slow-moving homage to Emily Dickinson, the greatest of American poets, surely the greatest of the 19th century. Ms Flower creates an Emily fey and strange, but her dialogue is so stilted that it's hard to believe that spare, harsh, idiosyncratic poet is this character. I adored Ms Flower's earliest mysteries, the Amish-set ones, but her later attempts haven't been working for me. I had hoped this intriguing premise and historical setting might bring out the same qualities I admired and enjoyed in the earlier mysteries, but I was disappointed.
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1,900 reviews84 followers
April 14, 2023
This novel was a disappointment in way too many ways. The writing was overly dramatic at times, sometimes even repeating what had just been stated so that the author could put an exclamation point at the end. The dialogue was at most times very stilted, dry and awkward, making everyone seem clunky and silly. The characters are not fleshed out at all, and everyone is shallow and more like caricatures, including Emily Dickinson. In fact, the portrayal of Emily Dickinson was so badly done, she has no depth or charisma at all. The author does little to enrich these very important characters (Emily and her family), or add to their personalities. As of other readers/reviewers have noted on gr, the facts about anti slavery and pro slavery were not at all historically accurate, which was a real drawback for me as well as them. The mystery itself is pretty basic, and the two characters who were supposed to be investigating it, didn’t really reveal any interesting clues or hints to help the reader make their own assumptions in this ‘case’. Nothing in this novel was really interesting, leading me to be as bored as possible throughout it, and I kept wondering why I even bothered to finish it at all… and I’m still not sure why. I certainly didn’t enjoy this novel much.

Barrie Kreinik is the narrator for the audiobook version of this novel, and she was very good. I hope to hear more of her work in the future.

Here is another review from my friend Melody, which details why this novel’s slavery facts were wrong:
Http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/...

All in all, I feel this novel was underdeveloped and overstated, and just not my kind of mystery novel. I’m sure others on here will enjoy this novel more than I did. But I won’t be continuing this series.

3 stars, and not recommended by me.
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Author 15 books56 followers
October 12, 2022
Outstanding! And not at all what I expected! Anyone who has read my reviews knows I am not a fan of first-person narration. Usually, I won’t even read them, unless they are well done. And by well done I mean where the character’s voice is hardly noticeable and doesn’t take over the story. And in this case, Because I Could Not Stop For Death is certainly well done. I immediately fell in love with the main character Willa Noble, a newly-hired housekeeper for the yet to be beloved and famed American poet Emily Dickinson. And Ms. Dickinson herself is a fun character, a woman who is not the wilting wallflower most men, including her father, might wish her to be.

The title, which comes from one of Ms. Dickinson’s poems, is a dead-on description of the plot.

When Willa’s brother Henry is unexpected killed, a death ruled quickly by the local constabulary, Willa has her doubts, and when Emily, who insists on befriending the young maid, insists on investigating his death, the accident story quickly unfolds into something much larger and more sinister, especially when a young stablehand insinuates something more is at play and then immediately regrets his comment. But Ms. Dickinson is not so easily put off and is determined to discover the truth for Willa, even if it puts their own lives in danger. Moving from Amherst, Massachusetts, to Washington D.C. in 1855, the action slowly builds and grows ever more twisted until the identity of the murderer is finally solved.

Filled with delightful historical research and character-building, this was a pure delight to read. And, that this story takes an unexpected twist makes it even better than I had anticipated. A great start to is sure to become a great series!
286 reviews7 followers
June 2, 2022
Willa Noble accepts a position as a maid in the Dickinson household in Amherst, Massachusetts and her brother Henry is killed in a stable accident only a few days later. People are saying it was Henrys fault and there are burn marks on the horse. Willa knows her brother would never hurt a horse and that there is foul play involved. Miss Dickinson wants to help her and together they go to the stables her brother worked and meet some interesting characters, including a stable hand Jeremiah York, a free black man, and the livery owner, the unlikeable Elmer Johnson. The author brings in real historical people and interesting fictional ones to the mystery. Willa is a very sympathetic main character and Emily Dickinson is presented in a respectful way, with a little humor also. Class distinctions, slavery, the underground railroad, and the perilous 1850's in Washington, DC and New England are written realistically and I look forward to Willa's next path. Thanks to the publisher and NetGalley for an advance copy in exchange for an honest review.
36 reviews
April 4, 2023
This book was completely unbelievable. Dialogue of characters from vocabulary to tone was very unreasonable and never changed according to station in life. Social issue diatribes did nothing to advance the plot and only lengthened the book unnecessarily. In the end, the person who “did it” was so very poorly set up that I was groaning inwardly when revealed. I was hoping to learn more about Emily Dickinson and all this book did was make me cringe from start to finish. Where is the editor in this?
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762 reviews74 followers
Shelved as 'did-not-finish'
September 29, 2022
The dialogue is forced and stilted. The narration is juvenile and the main character isn’t a child. I’m out.

This line might have done it for me:
“You can’t speak to me like that. I’m the minister’s son and superior to you in all ways.”
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1,341 reviews178 followers
October 14, 2022
Sadly DNFing at 25%. The research and historical accuracy are there, but everything else sucks like others have noticed. A boring and insipid protagonist who reads like she's a naive 12 year-old, awful dialogue and inner monologues. Emily wasn't enough to save this. Extremely disappointed.
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923 reviews169 followers
September 9, 2023
Emily Dickinson and her maid investigate murder on the Underground Railroad

It takes audacity, as well as a love of the subject, to base a fictional mystery series on a historical figure as well-known and well-loved as Emily Dickinson. Amanda Flower pulls it off pretty well, if not quite perfectly. Her love and respect for “Miss Emily” is evident throughout the novel. I enjoyed reading this first novel in the series, and look forward to seeing what other mysteries arise in Emily’s life.

The story is told through the eyes of Dickinson’s fictional maid, Willa Noble, who serves as both co-investigator and, through her relationship to the murdered young man, as the initial impetus for the investigation. Her brother’s death has a profound impact on Willa, and she is determined to find out who killed him and why, in hopes of bringing the culprit to justice, but also to expunge her own sense of guilt for not protecting him better.

The investigation leads Emily and Willa into the hidden world of the Underground Railroad and the brewing conflict between “slave” and “free” states. It also puts both of them (and particularly Willa) into quite real danger.

I found the mystery puzzling for the first two thirds of the book, but eventually I figured out the villain (long before Emily and Willa did; I felt they should have caught on a little sooner.) The red herrings are, perhaps, a bit obvious in retrospect, but as I was reading, I was surprised several times by what the pair learned, or what the clues seemed to suggest.

Flower does an excellent job contrasting the young women’s personalities and their class differences. Willa is driven by a need to protect her brother and keep a roof over both their heads. She is a hard worker, and well aware of her place in society; the latter often makes her uncomfortable with some of Emily’s plans and actions. Willa’s mother had a great influence on her, as did her father’s abandonment of the family. Both factors affect her friendship with Matthew, an Amherst policeman who has feelings for Willa.

Flower’s Emily is impulsive, intelligent, and observant, except when her attention is caught by her “inner life” of writing. She can be decisive (particularly when acting on impulse) and outspoken—sometimes too much so, both in terms of the dictates of antebellum society and the caution needed by an amateur investigator. Flower captures the nature of most of the Dickinson family relationships quite well, but I wasn’t quite convinced by her portrayal of Emily herself, nor of the prickly relationship between Emily’s sister Lavinia and Emily. While the fictional Emily’s willingness to traverse the distance between the classes rings true with what I know of the real Emily Dickinson, as does her outspokeness, her interest in investigating a crime and her lack of caution in pursuing that investigation weren’t quite in keeping with the historical Emily I know, or think I know. (By the way, if your image of Emily Dickinson is of the reclusive poet in white dresses, you should know that this book takes place before that period of her life.)

I acknowledge, however, that I’m not an expert on Emily Dickinson, just an enthusiastic amateur. My own conception of “Miss Emily” is forged through reading her poetry, the play The Belle of Amherst *, and, more recently, a book about Dickinson as a musician.** She was an accomplished, even gifted pianist who, in her early years, studied piano and choral singing with the same dedication she later brought to her writing. I was a bit sorry not to see any mention of her musical interests in Because I Could Not Stop for Death, since the book is set during the period in which Dickenson was still actively engaged in making and enjoying music.

The other challenge of writing historical mysteries of any sort, whether based on a historical figure or not, is getting the history right. On the whole, I think Flower does a good job in this regard. I’m not aware of any historical connection between Amherst and the Underground Railroad, but given how many Massachusetts towns are associated with the Underground Railroad, and the necessary secrecy surrounding it, it’s certainly plausible that Amherst played a part. And the rest of the historical details seem fairly accurate to me. One blatant linguistic anachronism (in the early review copy) did throw me temporarily out of the flow of the story; hopefully it was fixed before the book went to press. Otherwise, the historical details served to bolster my sense of being “in” the story.

I’m really looking forward to seeing how the series and the characters develop. While they never felt “flat” to me, there’s certainly room to explore more depth in both the main characters as well as the recurring secondary characters, particularly Matthew and the Dickinson family. I also hope to see more complexity of plot as well as specific references to Emily Dickenson’s poems and music. But overall, the series’s concept delights me, and I’m eager to see where it goes from here.



* I have both read and seen William Luce’s one-woman play, The Belle of Amherst , and even performed a portion of it. Back in my college years, for an introductory course on poetry in which we studied Dickinson’s oeuvre for several weeks, I excerpted, memorized, and performed a 21-minute monologue from the play for my classmates (in lieu of a paper, and with the professor’s permission—though I don’t think he was expecting anything that long and elaborate!)

** Emily Dickinson's Music Book and the Musical Life of an American Poet (George Boziwick)


Review originally published on my blog, The Bookwyrm's Hoard.

FTC disclosure: I received a review copy from the publisher. All opinions are entirely my own.
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December 12, 2022
The first in Amanda Flower's new Emily Dickinson Mystery series and, though very different from her cozies, I am definitely a fan! Her writing takes on a different cadence which makes sense, since this is historical fiction and the tone is more serious than Flower's usual quirky flare. Fitting since the mystery is a bit darker, more realistic. It's caught up in the politics of the era and that's about all I can say without revealing spoilers.

And though the series bears Emily Dickinson's name, it's Willa's story, told exclusively from her point of view. So though Emily figures predominately, we see her from Willa's perspective which is an interesting twist. They make a great contrast and not just in class, but personalities as well. It was also intriguing to see glimpses of the poet's life. This book inspired me to do some research and even read a few of her poems! Love it when a novel pushes me to look beyond my usual sphere.

A solid mystery, historical ambiance and relatable characters made this a compulsive read for me. Anxiously looking forward to the next Emily Dickinson Mystery instalment.

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