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Another short story in The Administration series.

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First published March 11, 2002

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Manna Francis

46 books609 followers
I'm the author of The Administration Series, a near-future SF dystopia published by Casperian Books. You can find the series in paperback, e-book, or (partly) on line at the Mannazone website.

I've been writing original slash since 2002 — or homoerotic fiction, m/m romance, yaoi, as you prefer. Original slash is my personal term of choice because I feel it best represents my writing in terms of style and what readers can expect to find there. Individual stories may or may nor be sexually explicit.

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Profile Image for Penny Well Reads.
833 reviews221 followers
May 28, 2018
I really liked it.

I remain addicted to this series.

My reviews of The Administration series’ books:
Book 1: Mind Fuck - 3 Stars
Book 2: Quid Pro Quo
Book 2.1: Unlucky Break - 2 Stars
Book 2.2: Friday - 3 Stars
Book 2.3: Pancakes - 5 Stars
Book 2.4: Surprises - 4 Stars
Book 2.5: Family - 4 Stars
Book 2.6: Mirror Mirror - 4 Stars
Book 3: Games & Players - 5 Stars
Book 3.1: Game, Set - 4 Stars
Book 3.2: As Long As It Lasted - 3 Stars
Book 3.3:Fuck of the Day - 3 Stars
Book 3.4: Wine, Women and Cushions - 2 Stars
Book 3.5: Playing with Fire - 5 Stars
Book 3.6: All Work and no Play - 3 Stars
Book 3.7: Gee - 2 Stars
Book 3.8:Shopping & Fucking - 5 Stars
Book 3.9: Pool School - 3 Stars
Book 3.95: Without the Game - 4 Stars
Book 4: Control - 4 Stars
Book 4.2: Wait For It - 4 Stars
Book 4.3: Caged - 5 Stars
Book 4.4: Unaccustomed as I Am... - 3 Stars
Book 4.5: Helen - 4 Stars
Book 4.6: Shopping, No Fucking - 4 Stars
Book 4.7: Losing It - 4 Stars
Book 4.8: Coming from America
Book 5: Quis Custodiet - 3.5 Stars
Book 5.2: Gratuitous Kink - 4 Stars
Book 5.3: Then and Now - 4 Stars
Book 5.4: Friends in the Right Places - 2 Stars
Book 5.5: Smoke & Cameras - 4 Stars
Book 5.6: Sunday - 3 Stars
Book 6: First Against the Wall - 4 Stars
Book 7: For Certain Values
Book 7.1: Family Values
Book 7.2: Boy's Toys - 3 Stars
Book 7.3: Make it a Surprise
Book 7.4: Prodigal
Book 8: Blood & Circuses
Book 9: Corpora Delicti
Gratuitous Epilogue
Profile Image for Laura.
1,458 reviews241 followers
December 28, 2012

”Now I know it’s part of me. There is no why.”

A SimTech celebration turns into a night of danger for Warrick and Toreth. The lights go out and sparks fly!

I love to watch Toreth and Warrick work as a team. They click, fit, calm, and feed off each other with humor, ingenuity, intelligence, and strength. Makes me smile. Hell—Warrick even made a joke…

”The light came from Warrick’s penknife. It really does do everything, doesn’t it? Toreth said.

Everything except cook and fuck.”
Hehe...

My favorite part though *sigh* is the little signs of tenderness and emotion. The interlacing of fingers is one of my personal favorites. A tangle of fingers, squeeze, and touch. My heart skips a beat every time the sociopath does it! Every time.

Smoke & Cameras is your typical night out with Toreth and Warrick. :D A night filled with adrenaline, champagne, striping, the arousing thrill of danger, and revelations. It is amazing what we can see in the dark.


Just one of my favorite moments:


863 reviews230 followers
November 18, 2012

This one was fun. I loved it.

“I could’ve lost him, Toreth thought, the idea shockingly sudden. He could’ve fallen and fucking died, and then…oh, Christ, what the fuck would I have done then? Unbearable…”

You love him. You love him. You love him.
Profile Image for Sheri.
1,417 reviews185 followers
November 30, 2012
Kink & fear will guarantee a memorable party
Warrick has much to celebrate. Big news at SimTech and they have a fancy bash to announce the news. Little bit of bad luck with a power outage and of course the boys have to find trouble.
"I fuck you, not your job," Warrick said, cool and precise."
hmmmm are we sensitive about it now Warrick? He hasn't changed since you've met him, well only to actually have a tiny bit of a conscience about it now. Oh dear, I didn't mean it..still got your back Keir.
After a frightening 'almost' they are both shaken and find comfort (which is hot loving for them) in each others arms.
"I could've lost him, Toreth thought, the idea shockingly sudden. He could've fallen and fucking died, and then...oh, Christ, what the fuck would I have done then?"
tell him you shitbag...just 3 little words..it won't kill you, promise
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634 reviews79 followers
December 9, 2012
The adrenaline charge from the near disaster heightened the orgasm as it burned through him. Perfect, coming perfectly together, with Warrick quiet for once, almost choking, twisting against Toreth as he pulled him close. Toreth panted for breath as the waves receded, leaving him aware of the stink of smoke in Warrick's hair against his open mouth.

I could've lost him, Toreth thought, the idea shockingly sudden. He could've fallen and fucking died, and then...oh, Christ, what the fuck would I have done then?

Damn, this is great writing-- re-reading series
Profile Image for Mel.
330 reviews526 followers
April 16, 2013
Toreth and Warrick are insatiable and incorrigible. The "I could have lost him", and Dilly's approval (finally!) gave the story that extra spark.
Btw: if this is really Dillian's exit, then I'm not getting all the hating.

3,5 stars
Profile Image for Trix.
1,324 reviews116 followers
February 11, 2013
I feel like I should read this all over again.

Profile Image for Irina Elena.
713 reviews169 followers
October 2, 2013
Maybe it's just the fact that this is the first TA story I picked up after a long break from the series?
...But no, because technically I should have been blasted in the face by the awesomeness.
I don't know, but this story felt kind of random. And a bit pointless. And kind of mild, compared to the previous stories.

I'm just... unimpressed.
That doesn't mean this one doesn't have its little flashes of brilliance too, because it does. Short insights in Toreth's mind, a tiny show of affection (more or less explicit) from him and all that jazz. But tbh, it's starting to be a bit too little.
I'm not getting bored as such. But.
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4,907 reviews5,216 followers
October 6, 2013

At a SimTech release party, Toreth and Warrick are trapped in a lift during a fire. In a high-security, high-tech building that apparently has some crappy design issues.

I'll raise it one star if it later turns out to be sabotage rather than coincidence.
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213 reviews12 followers
March 17, 2013
"I could've lost him, Toreth thought, the idea shockingly sudden. He could've fallen and fucking died, and then...oh, Christ, what the fuck would I have done then?
Unbearable."
Profile Image for LenaRibka.
1,457 reviews423 followers
March 6, 2014

It was Okay but I don't share the overwhelming excitement of the most readers about this sequel.
Profile Image for Ellen.
763 reviews
January 25, 2021
This is a very short novella, but I really liked it because once again Toreth realizes how important Warrick is to him (of course he doesn't verbalize it to Warrick) when a particular situation happens and Torrick could have lost him.
Profile Image for Em.
648 reviews137 followers
April 29, 2018
I couldn't lost him, Toreth thought, the idea shockingly sudden. He could've fallen and fucking died, and then ... oh, Christ, what the fuck would I have done then?
Profile Image for Pianisuparse.
2,265 reviews45 followers
June 8, 2018
4.5 'There is something about these two, I can't even put it into words. Seeing Toreth experience the eye opening revelation that he could not bare to lose Warrick ... priceless' stars.
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583 reviews89 followers
December 24, 2018
Loved it!
It's the first time Toreth expresses any kind of emotion, almost, gasp! affection towards Warrick (only in thought of course) and I'm holding on to it with both hands!
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406 reviews10 followers
August 13, 2016
Hmm. I have mixed feelings about this story.

On the bad side, there's:
-not much happening that affects the rest of the series, so...
-apart from the inherent excitement of the story, there's not much point to including it, aside from getting the update about the status of SimTech production, which could easily have been slipped into another story with a few lines of dialogue
-so basically, if this were a sex scene, I'd say it was titillating without any other purpose (although, I must say, there is quite a bit of sex in this story, even if that's overshadowed by the action-y bits)

But on the good side, you have:
-champagne, people in suits, and other lovely party details
-crazy adrenaline rush
-Toreth
-Toreth being privately emotional that Warrick could've died, which for him borders on "I love/care about this person"
-the news that Dillian
Profile Image for Danny Tyran.
Author 21 books185 followers
December 9, 2012
I hoped that something serious had happened. But then, that was just an excuse to f*ck in a fire refuge. Entertaining anyway. So I give it 3½ stars.
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1,912 reviews43 followers
August 11, 2015
First read on December 20, 2014.
Re-read on July 11, 2015.


I loved this one! Partly due to the fact that Warrick's business finally took off)) Yay for the sim production))
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