Last Call Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-08
review-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-08-genart-lc-sparks-2024-05-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-05-10
Requested 2024-04-26
Authors Mohamed Boucadair , Tirumaleswar Reddy.K
I-D last updated 2024-05-03
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Watson Ladd (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -07 by Tommy Pauly (diff)
Intdir Last Call review of -08 by Dr. Joseph D. Touch (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Tsvart Early review of -03 by Tommy Pauly (diff)
Intdir Early review of -03 by Dr. Joseph D. Touch (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Robert Sparks
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/-RHiYWsaqnT5XYbg2NXM2DUvctI
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2024-05-03
review-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-08-genart-lc-sparks-2024-05-03-00
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Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-08
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2024-05-03
IETF LC End Date: 2024-05-10
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready with nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

For more information, please see the FAQ at

<https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>.

Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-18
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2024-05-03
IETF LC End Date: 2024-05-10
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready with nits

Consider discussing, or point to existing considerations about, what should
happen when you are exporting very large udp options (perhaps constructed
maliciously to be as large as possible) and you are carrying the exported
values over UDP (Section 10.3 of RFC7011) and run out of room.

There are several references by section number into I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options
that have become stale. For instance the pointer to section 22 in the security
considerations should be pointing to section 24.