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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-15
review-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-15-secdir-lc-kivinen-2024-06-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2024-06-19
Requested 2024-06-05
Authors Mohamed Boucadair , Benoît Claise
I-D last updated 2024-06-13
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Tero Kivinen (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -11 by Wesley Eddy (diff)
Intdir Last Call review of -11 by Dirk Von Hugo (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Tero Kivinen (diff)
Tsvart Early review of -05 by Wesley Eddy (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -05 by Yingzhen Qu (diff)
Intdir Early review of -05 by Dirk Von Hugo (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tero Kivinen
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/qRNEK7tQeETh63wbbLR5vbx0PVw
Reviewed revision 15 (document currently at 18)
Result Has nits
Completed 2024-06-13
review-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-15-secdir-lc-kivinen-2024-06-13-00
This is the re-review of the document. There are still several places where the 
draft uses [RFC1234] without giving any indication what document that is, 
requiring readers to have the mapping from RFC numbers to names. This will
cause extra effort for new people who try to understand the this protocol.
I know it is annoying for the author to have to add those things, but 
hopefully this document will have more readers than authors, so the one
time cost of adding them will help multiple readers while reading the 
document. I know that there are RFCs where the number of authors 
is about the same than number of readers, but I hope this is not one 
of them...

There is still no example in section 6.1 with multi-octet options, having
such example would make it easier for readers to know which byte is sent
first and so on.