Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification-08
review-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification-08-opsdir-telechat-dhody-2024-07-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2024-07-09
Requested 2024-06-24
Authors Marco Tiloca , Francesca Palombini , Sebastian Echeverria , Grace Lewis
I-D last updated 2024-07-07
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Kyle Rose (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -06 by Joerg Ott (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Dale R. Worley (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Dhruv Dhody (diff)
Iotdir Telechat review of -08 by Niklas Widell
Opsdir Telechat review of -08 by Dhruv Dhody
Assignment Reviewer Dhruv Dhody
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/kOJCfw9XPEmjXa_LYr6wrasOVFw
Reviewed revision 08
Result Ready
Completed 2024-07-07
review-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification-08-opsdir-telechat-dhody-2024-07-07-00
# OPSDIR review of draft-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification-09

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in the last call may be
included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs
should treat these comments just like any other last-call comments.

The document provides a mechanism for the Authorization Server to notify about
revoked access tokens via access to a Token Revocation List (TRL) on the
Authorization Server via CoAP. The document is clear and well-written. The
motivation is described well.

I did a review of
[-06](https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ace/ElqlgO6FHPsjoqw7L3gKkbSqVUo/)
in the past and have now compared the
[diff](https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification-06&url2=draft-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification-08&difftype=--html)
with the latest version. The document is ready for publication.

Thanks!
Dhruv