Friday, June 28, 2024

Poetry Friday: Wabi-Sabi Poems



Ruins of a banquet hall,
Sudeley Castle, UK



June's challenge was to write a poem capturing the idea of wabi-sabi, the Japanese concept of impermanence and imperfection.  Here's a quote that Tricia shared from the book, Wabi Sabi: The Japanese Art of Impermanence by Andrew Juniper:

Wabi-sabi is an aesthetic that finds beauty in things imperfect, impermanent and incomplete. Taken from the Japanese words wabi, which translates to less is more, and sabi, which means attentive melancholy, wabi-sabi refers to an awareness of the transient nature of earthly things and a corresponding pleasure in the things that bear the mark of this impermanence.



Now, I've written about wabi-sabi before, and seemed to remember it being about celebrating "the crack in everything."  And, on our recent trip to Wales and England, I reveled in taking photos of glorious ruins of castles and abbeys.  (I do love a good ruin.)  But this time, the phrase that haunted me from that quote was "attentive melancholy." 

I'm not by nature a pessimistic person--not that I can't be negative or grumpy at times, but melancholy implies a sort of marination in sadness that I'm not capable of sustaining.  But what was I missing by not looking with that sort of attention--the kind of attention that doesn't try to change things for the better, but acknowledges what is unfinished, and imperfect, and sees the beauty in that?   

I'm so curious to see what my poetry sisters came up with in answer to that question. As for me, my only idea came from looking at my hands and thinking that I'm as spotted now as an old leaf. 





This leaf

this leaf will dry

the color seep away

the veins break


this leaf will fall

lose its light

unmoor from the tree


the road will go away

the fence, the barn, too

the house where I met him


this leaf will crackle

under muddy boots

this spotted hand let go


-----Sara Lewis Holmes (all rights reserved) 



Explore my poetry sisters' posts here:


Liz

Tanita

Laura

Tricia

Mary Lee



Poetry Friday is hosted by our own Tricia at The Miss Rumphius Effect.





 

Friday, April 26, 2024

Poetry Friday: Impossible Questions



Do tulips know how to kiss?


April's prompt was a fun one: write a poem inspired by "an impossible question."  It came to us via Laura Purdie Salas, who was inspired while listening to Georgia Heard talk about using this prompt with kids.  I'm not sure how Heard normally uses this exercise, but we kept it simple. During our ZOOM meet-up, we brainstormed impossible questions for five minutes, and then shared the pool of questions with each other.  Then we chose one (or two or ten) and were off and writing.  

Of course, there was some discussion of what an "impossible" question was. Maybe impossible only meant "hard to find out in a reasonable time frame"....like how many grains of sand in sandbox, or something "highly subjective"....like what is love?  In the end, I don't think it matters---the whole point was to get our brains spinning in new ways.

 For me, this prompt brought up memories of my dad telling me a riddle, which began like this: Why is a bicycle?  Of course, there is no why, but he had an answer ready:  Because a vest has no sleeves.  

YUP.  I didn't get it then, and don't get it now, but still....I LIKE it.  I like it in the way I like poems that I don't fully understand.  It's absurd, but then so is life, sometimes.  So for my poem this month, I celebrate impossible questions, and their impossible answers.  (Many thanks to my fellow poets whose pool of questions led me down this road, and to my dad for the riddle.)


I want answers...

How many dandelion wishes in a summer?
Do balloons cry when they burst?
How do you hold onto a smile? 

I would tell you—
if only I knew how many 
winks in “a while.”

Why is a banana not an apple?
Do tulips know how to kiss?
Who stole the sleeves from a vest? 

I would tell you—
if only I knew which subjects
fish schools teach best. 

How far do ants travel in a month?
Do trees remember your face?
Who first tried to carry a tune? 

I would tell you— 
if only I knew where
to find East of the moon.

Do whales see themselves in the sea like a mirror?
Where does the Leap Year go on off years?
How deep is the deepest hole you can dig? 

I would tell you—
if only I knew when something
little becomes big. 

Which days do birds paint the sky? 
How long does kindness last?
How far does an echo fall?  

I would tell you—
if only I knew anything—
anything at all. 

            -----Sara Lewis Holmes (all rights reserved) 


My fellow poets impossible question poems can be found here:






Friday, March 29, 2024

Poetry Friday: Animal Pantoums

 
My flowerpots,
pre-squirrels



March's challenge was to write a pantoum featuring an animal.  Mine is a modern pantoum, which repeats lines in the right order but doesn't use rhyme like a traditional pantoum would.  Usually, I love playing with rhyme (even making up words) but I kind of liked attempting this without rhyme this month---it forced me to focus on images and verbs instead of word play.  

A pantoum is not complicated but it does have strict rules. If you're intimidated, or feeling stuck, you can do as some of us did, and use this lovely exercise. Just answer the questions about something "ordinary" in your life, and a pantoum practically falls into your lap.  Or at least a rough draft of one! 

 
Here's something ordinary that I mined for my pantoum:



Squirrels in the Flowerpots 

Spring blooms, gone,
scattered soil on the steps,
holes big as my fist
a hail of empty walnut shells

scattered. Soil on the steps
near thin-fingered roots, torn;
a hail of empty walnut shells—
something no longer buried

near thin-fingered roots. Torn,
my hands twist and clutch;
something is no longer buried
in this broken pot that

my hands twist and clutch. 
Time and earth were found
in this broken pot—that’s
nothing, really—

time unearthed; found
holes big as my fist;
nothing, really—
spring blooms, gone.


              ------Sara Lewis Holmes (all rights reserved) 


My poetry sister's pantoums can be found here:

Kelly

Poetry Friday is hosted today by our own Tricia at The Miss Rumphius Effect.